Tag Archive: Script


TOM pg 123/150

Everyone loves a funny bad guy. (I think?)

TOM page 105

Everybody’s talking now… Turning up the intrigue…
And hey, hacking traffic-lights is a real thing. See the article here.
Everybody’s Talking, inspiring directors here.

TOM page 099

Making the audience think just a little, like a detective story. Perhaps the screenplay overstates the obvious, but again, it’s W.I.P. Testing options! With an intention to shoot more & edit back, rather than shooting too little…

The ‘break-in’ is the kind of scene that’s a nice ‘non-dialogue interlude of action’ – & an editor can stretch it if needed, with music. Because relentless dialogue can be tiring. A movie is not a play.

T.O.M. pg 008